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transgressions of the past haunt me
my soul is heavy with regret
how i long for her to see
that which i shall never forget
though i appear strong
much fear in me there is
to return to days long gone
and the people i truely miss
i give no thought to what i do
for my heart guides my path
but to live only for you
through the aftermath
of sorrow and grief
and times long forgotten
i know not my beliefs
my brain near rotten
so i give you my word
i swear not on true love
to give you the world
and all there is of
this body and soul
that yearns for your touch
for my princess you are
who else could give you so much?
©2006-2010 ~chromelink
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i dunno, i was just kinda in the mood to type something and this is what came out.... don't have an official title for it so...eh whatever

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It flowed really well. It really seemed like a single session kind of thing, though normally I don't get that kind of flow down after one run, but anyway, I really liked the whole thing. It had some awesome wording and kinda spoke to me, but I didn't really like the last two lines. Problably just a matter of personal opinion, but that's about the only thing I can complain about on it. It was awesome.
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yeah, i guess your right, but it was straight outta my head and onto the screen, but now that i look at it it doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of it.


thanks, i'm allways looking to make improvements ^_^

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"I am just a premeditated, spontaneoous figment of my own imagination"
:iconthecosmicdancer:
so touching, you are the bard!
D

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#The-Green-Carnations #Sapphire-and-Steel #Electrolust
"I didn't ask to be Secretary of Balloon Doggies, the balloon doggies demanded it!"
:iconchromelink:
*blush* am not......you spoil me :D

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"I am just a premeditated, spontaneoous figment of my own imagination"
:iconthecosmicdancer:
like hell I am!:D you're my bro! :hug:
D

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#The-Green-Carnations #Sapphire-and-Steel #Electrolust
"I didn't ask to be Secretary of Balloon Doggies, the balloon doggies demanded it!"
:iconchromelink:
:kiss: i love you too :hug:

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"I am just a premeditated, spontaneoous figment of my own imagination"
:iconthecosmicdancer:
:glomp: :kiss: dawww, shucks :blush:
D

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#The-Green-Carnations #Sapphire-and-Steel #Electrolust
"I didn't ask to be Secretary of Balloon Doggies, the balloon doggies demanded it!"

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